(i'll note i wrote most of this on sunday, but somehow forgot to hit "Post"...i think it mostly still works...)
Thanks for the screenshots. Given the success with your Ch 10, the radio is working, and i went through most of the listings for the repeaters listed (except that last one), and it looks like your programming is pretty spot on with the listings.
Under normal usage, as @SteveShannon mentioned, you won't normally be listening on the 467.xxx to hear if you have something coming back from the repeater. It IS a good way to at least confirm with another radio that your transmitting radio is indeed transmitting.
To rule out a tone issue, i'd probably switch all of them from tonesql to tone, and use transmit tones only, unless you're SURE there's another repeater in range that you'll want to filter out, then test again.
From there, the other main possibility I can see is range. I do see the bit of variance between the reported ranges of those repeaters, so i do wonder how accurate they all are...I know the mapping just draws a circle based on the range estimate entered, but real world sometimes varies. @WRKC935 is quite active on here, and could likely say better than any of us what the actual range and pattern are like for that one.
This map is an example from one of the ham systems here in CA, mapping signal strength through the region (in fairness, i'm not sure if this is modeled or on the ground tested), and note how signal strength varies based on obstructions. there'll likely be a bit less variance in pattern in flatter regions of the country, but not usually a 100% circle.